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Alan L Boles
2 min readJun 9, 2024

Rewrite The Editors Prompt

This Poem/Story is Derived From:

The Roses,

Rewrite The Editors Prompt

“ The First Red Rose “

“ The First Red Rose “

As I listened to a friend recant the moment

she lost her love of Red Roses.

My story drifted from her story to one of my

favorite segments from one novel.

It’s a story from the land the author called Arabby

where all of the Roses were White

and the Nightingales could not sing.

Now it seems there was this one Nightingale

who falls in love with one particular White Rose.

That bloomed on a midsummer day

and its scent was so sweet that Nightingale

embraced it with its wings so tightly

that a single thorn found its way into its heart.

In its dying breath it released the most beautiful

and melodious song that all of the other Nightingales

joined in celebration of its love and death.

And that one single White Rose was so overcome

by the love it had experienced that it absorbed

Alan L Boles
Alan L Boles

Written by Alan L Boles

In 1972 a Professor in Creative Writing encouraged me to write, thirty years later I began relearning the English grammar. I manage Poetry Groups on Facebook.

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